对一篇高考“满分作文”的病理分析——兼论高考作文命题的负导向

Analysis of a Full-mark Composition in Gaokao and Topic’s Negative Orientation

一篇有明显缺陷的高考作文却获得了满分,并在网络和书籍中被广泛收入,广受好评。这说明我们的高考作文认识和评价有失偏颇,且其负面影响不仅限于高考领域。探寻其源,是高考作文命题存在不容忽视的问题,主要表现在命题材料虚假、立论同质化、缺乏批判性思维等方面,必须加以改进,以促进作文教学良性发展。

Last gaokao has witnessed a composition with obvious defects gaining full mark,which is a phenomenon to be considered seriously.That such a defective writing not only gained a full mark,but also was widely received and praised on the Internet and some reference books is a serious problem to be cared about,since it has resulted more serious outcome and wider negative influence.In another word,our understanding and evaluation of composition in gaokao is biased,and its negative impact is widely spread.Actually,when we focus on the entitling problem of compositions for gaokao,we found that the materials assigned for writing were false,monotonous and lack of critical thinking,etc.Such problems are to be solved so as to promote a healthy composition teaching and writing.