评一首诗的两种译文

美国诗人卡尔·夏皮罗在第二次大战中写过一首诗"Nostalgia"。那时他正在美国海军服役。诗的全文如下: Nostalgia Karl shapiro My Soul stands at the window of my room,And I ten thousand miles away; My days are filled with Ocean’s sound of doom,salt and cloud and bitter spray.Let the wind blow, for many a man shall die. My selfish youth,my books with gilded edge,Knowledge and all gaze down the street;