神秘、神圣、神奇的三角诗——对詹冰《三角形》诗的形式解读与改造兼谈艺术的再创作

The Mysterious,Sacred and Miraculous Triangle Poetry——On the Decipherment and Reformation of Zhan Bing's Triangle Poetry and Artistic Recreation

在写作教学过程中,笔者常让学生对一些名篇进行改写、缩写、扩写或续写等再创作的训练,目的是让学生展开思想,大胆想象,求异思维,这样的练习往往能收到很好的效果,学生很容易掌握写作技能与规律。那么对于被称为最高语言艺术也是最讲究规范最具有保守文本的诗歌,能不能也可以进行改造呢?本文通过尝试对台湾著名图象诗人詹冰的一首《三角形》诗的形式的解读与改造,发现诗歌文本的形体如果能与自然界的形体和谐统一,更能增加诗的视觉效果,也更能增进读者对诗的解读兴趣。

In the process of writing teaching, the writer often has students do some adaptations, abridgements, expansions or continuations of well-known articles and other recreations, aiming at opening up their thought, setting their imagination free, and socking different thoughts. Such training often leads to effective result, by which students can master writing skills and regulations. And can poetry, which is regarded as highest-level language skills, the highest criterion and the most conservative version, bc adapted？ Through deciphering and reforming Triangle, by Zhan Bing, a famous poet in Taiwan, it shows that if the poetry structure is harmonious and unitivc with the natural form, the poetry will bc more visual, and attract more interest.