景物描写应伴随心灵的颤动

Describing Scenery from the Heart

当前学生作文最突出的1部,是缺乏生活气息,缺乏生活的留心和观察,缺乏对生活独到的感受,这一点在学生作文——写景的片段中表现得最为明显。写景不是孤立的,它常常同写人叙事,抒情结合在一起,创造环境气氛,烘托人物性格,推动情节发展。若要达到这个目的,前提即做一个生活的有心人。

An outstanding problem in students＇ compositions is lack of breath,observation and original feeling of life,which is more serious in the description of scenery.Scenery description is not isolated,but is more often combined with portraying characters,narrating,expressing emotions,creating atmosphere and promoting the development of plots.To achieve the goal,living attentively is a premise.