对《爱莲说》的修改

The Revised Version of My Love on Lotus

系统功能语法认为:在一个句子中,新信息和旧信息具有不同的交际价值,因此对交际所做的贡献也不一样。新信息所在的述位部分往往具有很高的交际价值,通常置于句末,即信息重心落在句末,故我们称这样的信息安排原则为"信息尾心"原则。根据钱冠连的"语言全息律",作者认为任何一个语篇都可以有语义尾心。作者从信息尾心原则得到启发,试着对《爱莲说》进行了修改。作者认为经典名篇并非死版本,我们可以拿来探讨能否可以修改,修改的余地有多大,修改后的效果如何。这是思索,是争鸣,是探索。

： Systemic-Functional Grammar says a clause, the new information and old information canT different communication value, thus the two kinds of information have different contributions to communication.The theme which usually carries the new information has higher communication value and it is usually placed at the end part of a clause, we say this is the ＂end focus＂ . This paper mainly discusses why and how we may revise My Love on Lotus by getting inspiration from ＂end focus＂ .