摘要
有这么一个故事:宋朝绘画之风盛行。宋子房做画院博士时,曾以“深山藏古寺”为题让考生作画。画作中有的着意表现“深山”,有的着意表现“古寺”。然而,束子房认为这些画作都很平庸,其原园就是不切题,因为最关键的“藏”字并没表现出来。那“藏”该如何表现呢?一考生是这样画的:苍郁的群山,代写语文教育论文中问露出庙里的半截旗杆,一条羊肠小道蜿蜒曲折,直通到山下水涧边,有个小和尚正在担水。这样就把“深山藏古寺”之“藏”字表现得淋漓尽致。这幅画的成功之处就在于真正抓住了“题眼”,即能集中传达旨趣的关键字——一“藏”。审题审得准、立意立得妙。作文如作画。作画要审题。作文更要审好题。审题,是作文的第一步。
There is such a story: the Song Dynasty painting of prevailing winds. Song ovary do painting Ph. D. , ever with " Temple of Tibetan mountains," let the examinee. Some of the paintings "mountain" , some deliberately show me the performance "the temple". However, the song ovary that these paintings are mediocre, the reason is not relevant, because the key" hidden" word and don't show it. The" hidden" how to show a candidate? Is this painting; verdant mountains, on behalf oi Chinese education of middle exposed half of the temple, a narrow winding path winding, leading to the mountain water beside the stream, there is a little monk is carrying water. This is the" Temple of Tibetan mountains " and " hidden" behaved most incisive. The picture ot" success is really captures the" eye", namely can convey meaningful keyword ----" hide". In the prospective, purposive Li miao. The composition such as paint. To my painting, composition is a good problem. Apparently, the first step is.
出处
《神州》
2012年第6期359-359,共1页
关键词
中考作文
审题方法
指要
关键
Senior high school entrance examination composition
analytic method
key points