冯敏昌二诗浅析

A Brief Analysis of Feng Minchang's Two Poems

冯敏昌《别内人》诗是其与共度蜜月的妻子潘氏道别时所写的诗,情怀谴倦,言真意切,撼人心弦。此诗起承转合自然,感情真挚深沉。另一首七律《展拜屯鹤村祖茔晚归——星月皎然中途有作》是诗人展拜祖茔及其归来时愉悦心情的展现。此诗自然流畅,叙事、议论、写景、抒情都达到了水乳交融的地步,空灵而蕴藉,深浅交辉。

One of Feng Minehang＇ s poems Parting from my wife was made when he left his wife, surnamed Pan, during their honeymoon, which was lingering and affective, genuine and moving, touching our hearts with natural opening, developing, changing and concluding and sincere feelings. His another poem Returning late from visiting ancestral tombs in Tunhe Villagemade on the way home in the clear and bright light of stars and moon is the reflection of poet＇ s good mood after visiting. This poem is very natural and spontaneous with narration, argumentativeness and scenery lyric in great harmony and adding radiance and beauty to each other.