从通讯名篇看通讯写作的改进——以《县委书记的榜样——焦裕禄》和《领导干部的楷模——孔繁森》为例

A Study on the Improvement of Communication Writing through the Appreciation of Famous Works-Take The Example of County Clerks-Jiao Yulu and The Model of Leading Cadres-Kong Fanshen as examples

以《县委书记的榜样——焦裕禄》、《领导干部的楷模——孔繁森》为例,指出他们写作上的缺陷:图解政治;上纲上线,无限拔高;说话过满,过于极端;合理想象;不合情理、不近人情。分析了造成的原因,从新闻专业主义报道理念出发,提出改进通讯写作的若干建议:公正、客观、全面、平衡的报道典型人物;树立视角意识,正确反映人物的内心世界和感受。

The paper studies the two reports of The of Leading Example of County Clerks -Jiao Yulu and The Model Cadres - Kong Fanshen, and points out their defects in writing. The two reports illustrate politics, mag- nify a problem to become a question of principle and use exaggerated words. The paper analyses the reasons and puts forward some suggestions on improving news writing from the aspect of professionalism： report representative figures fairly, objectively, profoundly roundly and evenly; establish perspective consciousness to reflect the inner world and feelings of the characters correctly.