名诗的意旨及优劣辨析

Intension of Famous Poems and Their Advantages and Disadvantages

世人对于历史上流传下来的名诗,每有理解上的错误。名人名诗未必都是好诗。即便是好诗,有些也可做进一步的修改提炼。如孟浩然《春晓》语句清新活泼,但内容支离相左,诗题有失精准;白居易《暮江吟》诗句内容不切题或扣题不紧密,个别用字欠精当;杜牧《江南春绝句》立意及用字造句失于俗套,缺乏细致刻画,层次淆乱;王维《九月九日忆山东兄弟》和唐温如《题龙阳县青草湖》尚有斟酌修改的余地。

Famous poems made by celebrities are not necessarily all good poems can also be further modified and refined. The verses in Spring MENG Hao -ran seem creative and lively, but the content of the poem is good poems. Even some Morning （ Chun Xiao ） by fragmented and contradicted. The content of River Sunset （Mu Jiang yin） by BAI Ju - yi is irrelevant and not close to the subject, and some words are lack of accuracy and precision. The conception and words in DU Mu＇ s Jiang Nan Spring （ Jiang Nan Chun） seem to be tritish and lack of diligence. And WANG wei＇ s Thinking of My Brother On Mountian - Climbing and TANG Wen - ru＇ s LongYang Grass Lake still have some rooms for refining and modification.