简评《大救驾》在创作上的得与失

On the Gains and Losses of the Creation of Da JiuJia

《大救驾》是昭通青年作家沈洋的第一部长篇小说。作品以明代皇帝朱允炆的逃难经历为主线,构勒出一幅生动的云南风情史。在对正史书写的宏大叙事的解构中,通过小写历史的描绘,实现了对云南人民简单而不平凡生活的重新建构,显示出了浓重而深厚的云南本土精神。当然作为一名以短篇小说见长的青年作家,沈洋的这部长篇小说在取得一定成绩的同时,也暴露出一些问题,主要是人物性格塑造的典型性和细节场景的描写这两个方面尚存不足,应该在以后的长篇小说创作中着力进行改进。

As the first novel of Shen.Xiang, a young Zhao Tong writer, Da j iu J ia presents us with a vivid picture of Yunnan＇s customary history following the storyline of Ming Dynasty EmPeror Zhu Yun-wen＇s fleeing experience. Based on the interpretation of the magnificent official history and through depicting a special historic event, the works realized the restructuring of people＇s simple but extra-ordinary life ih Yunnan and revealed the strong and profound local spirits. But as a young writer, Shen Xiang is better known for his short novel. Although this novel has been well-received, it also has such drawbacks as the lack of typical character personality and the detailed scenery description which should be im- proved in future＇s creation.