摘要
以王荣生、邓彤两位学者秉持的“微型化”写作理论为指导,通过师生合作、探究,弥补学生习作的“局部功能”的缺失,运用“点睛”之法,使学生的习作由平庸之作变成佳构,为此作了一些尝试,收到了良好的效果。
Under the guidance of the "miniaturization" writing theory uphold by the two scholars named Wang Rongsheng and Tang Tong, I madesome attempts to lead the students" mediocre writing into excellent composition through the cooperation and exploration of the teachers and students, making up for the "partial-function-missing" of .student compositions and using the way to indicate the theme with key words. Now it take a good effect on the student wring ability.
关键词
微型化
习作局部功能缺失
点睛之法
miniaturization "partial-function-missing" of student compositions indicate the theme with key words