试论徐志摩诗的“浅”——兼与一些评论者商榷

On the “Shallowness”of Xu Zhimo's Poems——also a discussion with some critics

徐志摩是中国现代著名诗人。由于种种原因 ,在对他的诗歌评价上却有很大的反差 ,其根本点就在于对徐志摩诗“浅”的认识上。有人把“浅”作为徐诗的局限性 ,在评述中作人为的掩饰 ,以提高徐诗的地位。有人则把“浅”作为批评徐诗的主要依据 ,从而否定徐诗的价值。本文认为 ,“浅”既包含了徐诗的不足 ,同时也显示出徐诗的个性 ,离开了“浅” 。

Xu Zhimo was a famous contemporary Chinese poet. Owing to various reasons,there are wide differences in the appreciation and comments on his poems——the essence of which lies in the understanding of the “shallowness”of his poems.some consider it the limitation of his poems and deliberately conceal it in their critiques to raise the status of them.On the other hand,some others deny the value of his poems,taking“shallowness”as their main reason to criticize them.In this article,the author's opinion is that:“Shallowness” not only contains the weekness of his poems,but also gives and shows the “personality”of his poems.Without “shallowness”,his poems will lose their particular artistic charm.