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最近,秋天姐姐收到了很多小朋友的来稿,这些作文都写得非常棒,但是仍然有些不足之处。一起来看看怎么修改吧!
My Favourite Season There are four seasons in a year.They are spring,summer, autumn and winter.I like autumn best.Autumn usually comes in September.It is cool and dry in autumn.The leaves fail and fall.[1]They become brown,yellow and red.We always fly kites and ride bicycles in the park.We also put on sweaters,coats and hats.I love autumn!
