摘要
1．优点：
本文真实地记录了小作者的植树经历。全文既有热火朝天的劳动场面的描写，又有个人的心理感受的捕写。难能可贵的是，小作者学以致用，运用了自己学过的多种句型，使得文章生动、流畅。
Today is March 12＇h. It is Plaming Tree Day. There were no classes this morning. Tile all＇2＇ teachers and students went to plant trees along the road in front of our school.
出处
《中学生英语（上旬刊）》
2015年第3期6-6,共1页
English Journal for Middle School Students
