摘要
1．优点：
文章条理清楚，思路清晰。首先，介绍旅游的时间、目的地、交通工具等信息；然后，描述旅游过程中的具体活动及所见所闻等；最后，表达旅游后的感受。全文通顺流畅，是一篇值得推荐的学生习作。
Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my parents. We took a high-speed rail and after an hour we got to Qingdao. It was a beautiful city. The sky was blue and the air was clean.
出处
《中学生英语（上旬刊）》
2015年第3期7-7,共1页
English Journal for Middle School Students
