摘要
小小的一幅画作，体现了小作者对家人的思念之情，也反映了目前中国社会留守儿童的问题。此画作于去年圣诞节前夕。作者首先描述了画面，然后简要介绍了自己的情况以及画作想要表达的情绪，思路清晰，语言简洁。
About the picture：There is a deer in the picture.The deer plays in the forest all day.It＇s getting dark.The deer is on his way home.There is a river in front of him.He runs across the bridge.His home is near the river.Then he can meet his parents.They will have a happy Christmas!
