Our Holiday Life

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Dear Betty, i I＇m glad to have received your letter. Our holiday life has changed a lot. In the past, we had to study at home, doing much homework, which made our holiday bored. Now, learning and relaxing still is very important, but we also can do some other things. For example, we usually help our parents do housework and farm work. I think they are very important to help us to understand our parents.