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[教师点评]这是一篇介绍个人习惯的习作.全文主题突出,结构合理,详略得当.however,as possible as I can,what＇s more等词语及定语从句、宾语从句等的运用,增加了文章的文采.但如能将第三段中的more and more fat改为fatter and fatter,则表达会更加恰当.
Hello, my name is Wang Xingyu. I＇m a mid-dle school student. I＇m seventeen years old and a naughty boy who is more than 1.8 meters tall.I always go to bedearly and get up early to read books. It can not only make me feel peaceful and relaxed, but also open up my eyes. I am also a hard-working boy and I often help my parents with housework as possible as I can. What＇s more, I like to take part in some activities, such as swimming, dancing and travel-ing.
