摘要
教师点评：
这是一篇七年级下学期学生的作品.文章文风朴实,层次清晰,过渡自然.作者首先开门见山地点出主题,表明自己不光学习成绩好,还有一些爱好;接着从唱歌、阅读、弹琴三个方面展开具体叙述;最后升华主题,说明爱好能使得一个人成长为全面的人,并受益终生.
First of all,let me introduce myself.I＇m a student in Grade Seven.I＇m energetic and humorous.I＇m a good student at school.and I often get good scores in the examinations.At the same time,I have some hobbies.I like singing,especially humming songs.
