摘要
1.优点:本文作者紧扣题目要求,写出了小组中同学所做的家务和自己对做家务的看法。简单句和并列句交错使用,使行文富有变化,错落有致;行文中较好地使用了连接词,如now, as for me,in my opinion, besides, that' s all等,衔接过渡自然;本篇习作还较好地使用了固定短语和结构,是一篇很好的习作。
Dear students, Good morning! Now let me report the discussion work at weekends and Linda likes cooking dinner with her her family. As to me, I usually help my father water in our group. Tom cleans up rooms Gina sometimes washes clothes for the flowers.
出处
《中学生英语》
2018年第26期10-10,共1页
English Journal for Middle School Students