脂砚代写红楼梦 畸笏初评秦可卿——石头记甲戌本评点(系列之10)

Zhi Yanzhai Takes the Place of Writing the Dream of the Mansion and Ji Hu Comments on Qin Keqing for the First Time——A Series of Comments on The Story of Stone of Jiaxu Version X

此一回撰写秦可卿之死,为脂砚斋代写此书的较早回目;同此,此书的评点,也并非脂砚斋来担任评点人,而是由原作者以畸笏的名义来评点。开始的评点,并非艺术性的评点,而是作为审稿人的审稿意见出现。

In this chapter, the death of Qin keqing was written, which is a earlier chapter that Zhi Yanzhai took the place of writing this novel, at the same time, who commented on this novel isn't Zhi Yanzhai but the original author acting on Ji Hu's behalf. The initial criticisms are not artistic, but it is views on the manuscript as a reviewer.