作文中描写要细致入微彰显文采——读写结合学习鲁迅的《药》的描写技巧

In the composition, the description should be meticulous and highlight the literary talent -- Reading and writing techniques combined with the description techniques of Lu Xun's "medicine"

首先学生读范文《药》领悟描写技巧,接着老师引导学生联想回忆学过的课文的描写片段,由此总结描写的作用和描写技巧;接着老师还可以再举例,高考优秀作文优秀描写片段鉴赏。最后迁移练笔,学以致用,读写结合,以读促写,培养写作能力。

first,students read the sample text "medicine"to comprehend the description skills,then teachers guide students to recall the description fragments of the text they have learned,so as to summarize the function and description skills of the description.Then the teacher can give another example.Finally,I will transfer my writing skills,apply my knowledge to practical use,combine reading and writing,and improve my writing ability by reading and writing.