汉译组构流畅性优化原则

On the Principle of Optimizing Fluency in the Chinese Translation Composition

汉译组构不畅是读者能感到的直观印象,这归结于外语的影响和语际转化功夫不够。汉译流畅性优化的具体措施是基于原文语义加强汉译语音方面的锤炼与修改,如突出语意连贯,讲究语音和谐,形成语势,兼顾语篇的衔接,如汉化衔接标记,善用流水句,长短句错落有致等。通过不断修改汉译可增加流畅性。

A lack of fluency is an intuitive impression that the reader can feel due to the influence of foreign languages and the inadequacy of interlingual translation.The concrete measures to make Chinese translation smooth are to strengthen the refinement and modification of the phonetic aspects of Chinese translation based on the meaning of the original text,such as emphasizing the coherence of the meaning,paying attention to the harmony of the pronunciation,forming the linguistic momentum,and taking into account the cohesion of the text,for example,the use of cohesive markers in Sinicization,the use of paratactic sentences,long and short sentences,etc.Through constant revision,Chinese translation can be enhanced with fluency.