短文改错练与析

Would you like to spend your holidays traveling by ballon? The first balloon trip took place in France in 1783. It was lasted for only 8 minutes. About a year years late, an American and a Franchman decided to cross the Channel by a balloon. High over the Channel, they discovered a hole on the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The gas keeping the balloon up was escaped. The men threw all their belongs into the water make the balloon lighter. It started to rise higher agai, but it was still too close to water.