情节太离谱 畸恋真撩人——评欧阳黔森的中篇小说《白多黑少》

Too Odd Plot and Real Abnormal Love——Remark on the novelette 《Much White and Little Black》 by Mr Ouyang Qianshen

青年作家欧阳黔森的新编中篇小说《白多黑少》,其主要情节不符合公认的准则,致使男女主人公之间的畸恋几成荒唐的骗局。其症结在于人为地拉大了二人的年龄差距及作者的社会生活经验欠缺与浮躁心态所致。

In the novelette <Much White and Little Black> by Mr Ouyang Qianshen, a young writer, the main plot is not in accordance with the norm generally accepted. The abnormal love between the hero and the heroine almost leads to a shell game. Such condition results from that in the story the year gap between the hero and the heroine is artificially increased and the author is short of enough life experience and has a little impatient idea.