由复杂定语引起的语病之辨析与修改

Discrimination and Correction of Faulty Wordings Caused by Complicated Modifiers

复杂定语是指一个中心语之前有两个或两个以上的简单定语。复杂定语因其结构复杂,往往容易引起语病。结合实例分析了由复杂定语引起的语序不当、并列不当、搭配不当、成分残缺、重复累赘等5种典型的语病,提出了辨析与修改这类病句的3种方法——换序法、层析法和类比法。

The complicated modifier refers to two or more simple modifiers used in front of the center word. Its complex construction may easily lead to faulty wordings. This paper analyzes 5 kinds of faulty wordings, namely, improper word order, inappropriate coordination, unsuitable collocation, incomplete composition, and redundancy or wordiness in some sentences. For the discrimination and correction of faulty wordings, the author offers such methods as changing word order, analyzing the construction, and analogy.