一、不一致不一致包括主谓不一致、数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。例:When one have money,he can do what he want to do. 剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而have应为has。同理,want应为wants。改为:Once one has money,he can do ...一、不一致不一致包括主谓不一致、数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。例:When one have money,he can do what he want to do. 剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而have应为has。同理,want应为wants。改为:Once one has money,he can do what he wants(to do). 二、修饰语错位例:I believe I can do it well and l will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末。三、悬垂修饰语所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。展开更多
文摘一、不一致不一致包括主谓不一致、数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。例:When one have money,he can do what he want to do. 剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而have应为has。同理,want应为wants。改为:Once one has money,he can do what he wants(to do). 二、修饰语错位例:I believe I can do it well and l will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末。三、悬垂修饰语所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。