最近,秋天姐姐收到了很多小朋友的来稿,这些作文都写得非常棒,但是仍然有些不足之处。一起来看看怎么修改吧!Four Seasons There are four seasons in a year. They're spring, summer, autumn and winter. Spring is warm. I can s...最近,秋天姐姐收到了很多小朋友的来稿,这些作文都写得非常棒,但是仍然有些不足之处。一起来看看怎么修改吧!Four Seasons There are four seasons in a year. They're spring, summer, autumn and winter. Spring is warm. I can see green trees, yellow birds and red flowers in the garden. How beautiful! I can ride a bike in spring.展开更多
Let's Climb the Mountain I like climbing mountains, because the scenery* is charming. Look! There are many big green trees around the mountain. The birds like singing in the trees. The rabbits like playing games w...Let's Climb the Mountain I like climbing mountains, because the scenery* is charming. Look! There are many big green trees around the mountain. The birds like singing in the trees. The rabbits like playing games with their friends under the trees. I like reading books under a tree.展开更多
文摘最近,秋天姐姐收到了很多小朋友的来稿,这些作文都写得非常棒,但是仍然有些不足之处。一起来看看怎么修改吧!Four Seasons There are four seasons in a year. They're spring, summer, autumn and winter. Spring is warm. I can see green trees, yellow birds and red flowers in the garden. How beautiful! I can ride a bike in spring.
文摘Let's Climb the Mountain I like climbing mountains, because the scenery* is charming. Look! There are many big green trees around the mountain. The birds like singing in the trees. The rabbits like playing games with their friends under the trees. I like reading books under a tree.