My Family

【栏目要求】1.将学生习作根据中考分值给出成绩;2.在应该修改的地方划线并标注序号;3.根据所标序号进行修改并说明修改的理由;4.给学生习作点评〈优点与不足〉;5.请点评名师提供简历一份,包括：学校、职务、职称、荣誉、教研教学成果、照片一张。来稿请寄：430079华中师范大学外国语学院《中学生英语》杂志社初中部收My name is Shi Ruqin.I am from a worker’s family.There are six peoples①in my family.They are my grandfather,my grandmother,my father,my mother,my sister and I.Every member in my family works hard.My grandfather and grandmother are farmers.

An Introduction of Myself

I’m a 13-year-old girl.I like laughing.I like listening to music in my spare time.I too1have other hobbies,such as reading books and swimming.I have two sisters.One of them will go to college this term.Because2her influence,English has become my favorite subject.The other will become a fashion designer.

The Four Seasons

A year has four seasons.Every season has three months.The weather of one season is different from that of any other.The first season is spring.The three months are March,April and May.During that time we have a warm weather1and fine days.All plants come to life.Animals wake up from hibernation(冬眠).It is time to2farmers to get ready for their fields.The second season is summer.The three months are June,July and August.The

女孩也行

在我很小的时候，我想做一些男孩做的事情。然后大人们告诉我，我不会成功，因为我是一个女孩，应该做女孩的事。我很生气。虽然我是一个女孩，但是我可以做到许多男孩能做的事情。许多年过去了，我一直告诉我自己我能做到，我永远不会落后于男孩。事实上，我做了很多男孩能做到的事情。事实证明，我是一个优秀的女孩。我学到了永远不要让别人限制自己，做你想做的事。女孩的能力永远不会落后于男孩的。

我的同学

Since I went to middle school, I have met a lot of interesting friends, and most of them are my classmates. Though we are from different areas and share different interests, we are a group and make progress together.