1.优点:本文作者紧扣题目要求,写出了小组中同学所做的家务和自己对做家务的看法。简单句和并列句交错使用,使行文富有变化,错落有致;行文中较好地使用了连接词,如now, as for me,in my opinion, besides, that' s all等,衔接...1.优点:本文作者紧扣题目要求,写出了小组中同学所做的家务和自己对做家务的看法。简单句和并列句交错使用,使行文富有变化,错落有致;行文中较好地使用了连接词,如now, as for me,in my opinion, besides, that' s all等,衔接过渡自然;本篇习作还较好地使用了固定短语和结构,是一篇很好的习作。展开更多
Dear students,Good morningNow let me report the discussion work in our group.Tom cleans up roomsat weekends and Linda likes cooking dinner with her mum.Gina sometimes washes clothes forher family.As to1me,I usually he...Dear students,Good morningNow let me report the discussion work in our group.Tom cleans up roomsat weekends and Linda likes cooking dinner with her mum.Gina sometimes washes clothes forher family.As to1me,I usually help my father water the flowers.In my opinion,it is necessary for us students to do some housework.By doing it,we展开更多
文摘1.优点:本文作者紧扣题目要求,写出了小组中同学所做的家务和自己对做家务的看法。简单句和并列句交错使用,使行文富有变化,错落有致;行文中较好地使用了连接词,如now, as for me,in my opinion, besides, that' s all等,衔接过渡自然;本篇习作还较好地使用了固定短语和结构,是一篇很好的习作。
文摘Dear students,Good morningNow let me report the discussion work in our group.Tom cleans up roomsat weekends and Linda likes cooking dinner with her mum.Gina sometimes washes clothes forher family.As to1me,I usually help my father water the flowers.In my opinion,it is necessary for us students to do some housework.By doing it,we