一、给文章润色
给文章润色,主要从以下三个方面入手:
1.用词要简洁
(1)删除多余词语。例如:
It happened that Mr. Yap was elected to the position of Chairman of the well-established Singapore Literature Society th...一、给文章润色
给文章润色,主要从以下三个方面入手:
1.用词要简洁
(1)删除多余词语。例如:
It happened that Mr. Yap was elected to the position of Chairman of the well-established Singapore Literature Society that existed in this country.这个句子内容简单,却有一个主句和两个从句,显然复杂了些,可以简化如下:展开更多
文摘一、给文章润色
给文章润色,主要从以下三个方面入手:
1.用词要简洁
(1)删除多余词语。例如:
It happened that Mr. Yap was elected to the position of Chairman of the well-established Singapore Literature Society that existed in this country.这个句子内容简单,却有一个主句和两个从句,显然复杂了些,可以简化如下: