最近,秋天姐姐收到了很多小朋友的来稿,这些作文都写得非常棒,但是仍然有些不足之处。一起来看看怎么修改吧!Four Seasons There are four seasons in a year. They're spring, summer, autumn and winter. Spring is warm. I can s...最近,秋天姐姐收到了很多小朋友的来稿,这些作文都写得非常棒,但是仍然有些不足之处。一起来看看怎么修改吧!Four Seasons There are four seasons in a year. They're spring, summer, autumn and winter. Spring is warm. I can see green trees, yellow birds and red flowers in the garden. How beautiful! I can ride a bike in spring.展开更多
Hello,boys and girls!I have some good habits and a healthy diet.I get up early.I never go to bed late.I do my homework before dinner.I help my parents.I help my parents.I listen to my teachers at school.I keep my room...Hello,boys and girls!I have some good habits and a healthy diet.I get up early.I never go to bed late.I do my homework before dinner.I help my parents.I help my parents.I listen to my teachers at school.I keep my room clean and tidy.I go to school early.I have my meals on time.展开更多
In my healthy diet, I always eat a lot of rice and bread.⑴ I always eat a lot of fruit and vegetables because they are good for our bodies. Eating too much meat can make us fat, so I usually eat some meat and fish. M...In my healthy diet, I always eat a lot of rice and bread.⑴ I always eat a lot of fruit and vegetables because they are good for our bodies. Eating too much meat can make us fat, so I usually eat some meat and fish. Most children like eating sweet food. But eating too much sweet food is bad for our teeth, so I eat a little sweet food at a time. I always eat a few eggs every week. I always drink milk every day. Do you have a healthy diet?展开更多
As a student, I have some good habits and some bad habits. I go to bed early and never get up late. I keep my room clean and tidy. I listen to my teachers carefully in class. I like eating sweet food and eat a lot at ...As a student, I have some good habits and some bad habits. I go to bed early and never get up late. I keep my room clean and tidy. I listen to my teachers carefully in class. I like eating sweet food and eat a lot at a time. So I have a toothache. I don't eat breakfast on time, so my stomach is not good. Milk is good for our body. We should drink lots of milk. So I drink a glass of milk every day.展开更多
文摘最近,秋天姐姐收到了很多小朋友的来稿,这些作文都写得非常棒,但是仍然有些不足之处。一起来看看怎么修改吧!Four Seasons There are four seasons in a year. They're spring, summer, autumn and winter. Spring is warm. I can see green trees, yellow birds and red flowers in the garden. How beautiful! I can ride a bike in spring.
文摘Hello,boys and girls!I have some good habits and a healthy diet.I get up early.I never go to bed late.I do my homework before dinner.I help my parents.I help my parents.I listen to my teachers at school.I keep my room clean and tidy.I go to school early.I have my meals on time.
文摘In my healthy diet, I always eat a lot of rice and bread.⑴ I always eat a lot of fruit and vegetables because they are good for our bodies. Eating too much meat can make us fat, so I usually eat some meat and fish. Most children like eating sweet food. But eating too much sweet food is bad for our teeth, so I eat a little sweet food at a time. I always eat a few eggs every week. I always drink milk every day. Do you have a healthy diet?
文摘As a student, I have some good habits and some bad habits. I go to bed early and never get up late. I keep my room clean and tidy. I listen to my teachers carefully in class. I like eating sweet food and eat a lot at a time. So I have a toothache. I don't eat breakfast on time, so my stomach is not good. Milk is good for our body. We should drink lots of milk. So I drink a glass of milk every day.
